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It was a beautiful day in Konoha… it was a beautiful snowy day… five days before Valentine's Day. Normally, it was just a typical week but this week, the high school was getting a new transfer student… a supposedly 'bad boy'. The rumors had started out with him being in some kind of gang, that he had robbed and had killed a man in some kind of gun fight.

That he only cared about himself and no one else…

My friends had warned me not to go out with him, that he wasn't good enough for me… but it's like what people say, you can't fight what your heart desires… and mine desired him to love me back… But what would someone like me have to do to get him to love me when I was one of the shyest girls in the school?

Maybe, I could be brave enough to go through with it… I have to at least try…


The snow that fell from the snow was so white and pure… it made a young woman think about what would happen within the next five days… it was going to be Valentine's Day, and yet she didn't know who to get a gift for… Sighing softly, the young woman pulled on her soft lavender coloured hat over her blue hair from the soft cold breeze…

Looking up at the tall white building, the young woman just stared at the beauty of the school with her beautiful lavender coloured eyes… no matter how many times she stared at the school; she just couldn't get over how beautiful the school was… As she ran toward the school, Hinata bumped into someone, and fell into the snow…

"Ow… I'm sorry…"

Rubbing her forehead, Hinata looked up and blinked at what she saw… Standing above her was a tall man with spiky blond hair… beautiful sparkling ocean blue eyes that made Hinata think of the scenery just outside of the beach house that her family owned. On his cheeks were three whisker marks… his face seemed calm, yet he had a goofy grin… Looking at his clothes, she saw that he was wearing a white button down shirt with a few buttons undone, and in the middle of his chest was a blue crystal with two steel like pearls… it was the most beautiful piece of jewellery she had ever seen…

Looking at the rest of his clothes, Hinata saw that he wore black pants, and a matching jacket that touched the ground… On his forehead was a black headband with a red swirl on his center of his forehead… She had never seen a more handsome man in her life… Before she knew it, the man grabbed her arm and helped her to her feet. Blinking in confusion, Hinata looked at the boy and wondered why he wasn't wearing a winter coat…

"You should be more careful, next time you might not have had bumped into a nice guy." With that, the young man started to walk toward the school, Hinata couldn't believe what was going on… though, what she could tell was that she felt a warmth starting to build up in her cheeks… she didn't understand why that was but… what she did know, was that she wanted to know who that guy was badly…

Shaking her head, Hinata grabbed her bag and ran on inside to hurry up and get ready for class. Though, when she had reached her locker, the young woman had started to hear the rumors of the transfer student.

"Did you hear we're getting a new transfer student?"

"Yeah, they say that he was in a gang…"

"I heard that he beat the toughest gang in town!"

"I had heard that he killed someone in a gun fight."

"Oh? I heard that he robbed someone once…"

Hinata didn't believe any of those rumors… there was no way that rumors were true… what was the point in listening to them anyway? Shaking her head, the young woman got rid of her hat, her jacket, her mitts and boots. Revealing that she was wearing a white blouse with black pants, since it was winter, there was no point in wearing her usual sleeveless shirt and shorts…

Looking around, Hinata wondered if she would see the blond man again… though, she didn't see any sign of him. Sighing, she grabbed her books and headed off to class, normally, she would chat with her friends Sakura and Ino, but since she was a little late coming into school, they must have gone to class already. Though, no matter where she went, the rumors kept on flying about the 'bad boy transfer student'.

Sighing softly, the young woman arrived to her class and saw a girl with long blond hair wearing a purple sweater and matching purple track pants, her eyes was a sky blue with no pupils, almost like her own. The girl next to her was someone a little shorter with short bubble gum pink hair, green eyes and wore a pink t-shirt and black pants.

"Hinata, what took you so long?" asked pink haired girl with a small smile.

Hinata could only smile as she took her seat and looked at her friends. "I bumped into someone on the way into school."

"Oh? Who was it?" asked the blond girl.

"I'm not really sure Ino, I saw that he had spiky blonde hair, blue eyes and whisker marks on his face… otherwise, I don't know who he is…" Hinata said with a sigh, placing her chin on her palm as she looked off into the distance… thinking about him, made her face turn a light pink.

Though when she looked up at her friends, she saw that their skin was ghostly white… Why? Tilting her head, Hinata asked "what's wrong? Your faces are really pale, you guys sick?" Hinata didn't know why they were looking so frightened all of a sudden, but what she did know, was that it couldn't have been a coincidence that they would turn pale cause of what she had said… right?

"Hinata… I think that was the transfer student that you bumped into…" said the pink haired girl…

"Sakura, if that was the transfer student than why was he so nice?"

"It must have been a trick! Haven't you heard the rumors?"

"Yeah, least some of them… Why?"

"He's dated a lot of girls from his last school and they were never seen again!"

Hinata just stared at her friends as if they were crazy. There was no way that was possible, come on… he could have been like that, there was this aura around him that told her that… Turning away from her friends, Hinata stared at the front of the class as the teacher came in. A tall man with gravity defying grey hair, a face mask and his one eye closed. He walked in with the same man that she had seen earlier…

"Class, this is the new transfer student Naruto Uzumaki, please make him feel welcomed."

Staring at him, Hinata couldn't believe it… the boy that she had bumped into was the transfer student? There was no way that it could be possible, all of the rumors… they couldn't be true, they just couldn't be! He was so nice to her, helped her up when she just sat down on the cold snow like an idiot! It just can't be true!

"My name is Naruto Uzumaki, don't get in my way or piss me off or I'll kick your ass."


Since Naruto came yesterday, everyone seemed almost afraid of him. Some of the jocks would pick fights with him and lose cause of his yo-yo. But, there was something that bothered her… whenever he saw her, he would only smile… and that itself made her blush so badly that she almost fainted…

Okay she has fainted about three times in the last few hours.

But, it seems that no matter what she does… Hinata can't bring herself to speak to him again… It seemed that no matter what she did, that it just wouldn't work for her… Sighing softly, the young woman walked to her locker and was just grabbing some of her books for math class since she had wasted her lunch period on thinking on how to approach Naruto…

Just as she closed the door turning to her left there stood the man she was thinking about. He just stared at her with a calm expression.

"You're Hinata right?"

Hinata's face went into a soft pink… Not sure what to say… Though, all she could do was nod. Why was he talking to her…? Was it because she did something to irritate him? Sure she had heard about the rumors but she didn't believe them… A part of her wanted to know if the rumors were true but at the same time… a part of her didn't. Fearing that they could be true, but deeply, she hoped that it wasn't true…

"I wanted to know… why aren't you afraid of me?"


"Everyone else runs at the mere sight of me, but you do not… Why?"

Hinata didn't know how to answer him… for even she didn't know… Maybe, it was because she believed to give someone a chance rather than just assume the worst of people from what she hears. Taking a deep breath, Hinata was about to say something until the bell rang. Naruto looked up and sighed before walking away. Hinata could only frown… she had… just about told him what she had thought… Maybe, she couldn't tell him with words but with a gift instead? Yeah! That's what she'll do! Smiling, the young woman thought that she should make him her home made chocolates!

'That is something I can do, it might cheer him up!' Hinata thought with a bright smile and a soft giggle.

Today just might be a good day after all… All she had to do was get home, make some of her home made chocolate without the girls knowing her plans and she could sneak the chocolate into Naruto's locker without him knowing… sounds simple enough… But maybe it was tougher than it sounds? Nah… But at least Hinata didn't faint this time that was a plus for her.

Smiling, Hinata walked into math class and got ready for her test… Least Naruto wasn't in this class… wait… was he? She had been so focused on trying not to faint that she was never in math class yesterday to find out! Turning toward the door and saw Naruto slowly walking through the doors. His expression was blank and emotionless… just as it was when he first entered homeroom yesterday…

'Why does he always look like that' thought Hinata with a frown, not really sure why he always looked like he was shielding his emotions but when he was around her, from what she has seen that he would show a little bit of emotion… It made her wonder why that was…

Taking a deep breath, Hinata looked up and noticed that Naruto walked over to the seat that was next to hers. Blushing crimson, the young woman didn't know that she was the one sitting next to him… it didn't make sense but at the same time it did… the seat next to her was the only one that hadn't been taken yet. Naruto sat in his seat, leaning back a bit as he just stared boredly at the chalk board.

Hinata stared at the board, not sure what she was to do… all she knew, was that she had to keep herself from fainting… But, he was so close… so very close… Her face went crimson as she tried to think on what she should do to keep herself from fainting…


Eyes widening, Hinata slowly turned around and saw a pair of big blue eyes looking back at her… Naruto was mere inches away from her face. Which had caused the poor girl to just stare back with a crimson coloured face, why was he so close? What was he trying to do?


"You have something on your face…" Hinata didn't know what to say… it was as if her voice was gone from her vocal cords. Naruto leaned in closer and closer… seeming like he was about to kiss her. Her face kept on getting darker and darker thinking that he was going to place his lips upon hers.

Naruto placed his hand on her chin to hold her still. Hinata couldn't look, she just couldn't…

Her eyes were tightly shut, Naruto still held onto her face with his hand… but, she felt something on her cheek… Slowly, Hinata opened her eyes and saw that Naruto was smiling at her. "You had a piece of rice on your face." He said, holding up a single grain of white rice and tossed it into his mouth. Hinata couldn't take it anymore; he was just so close…

Her face got so warm that it would have burned anyone's skin. Hinata soon saw nothing but darkness as she blacked out.


Hinata had woken up in her own home… strange… She didn't remember walking on home after math… Shaking her head, the young woman got up and walked out of her room, and down the stairs. Once she reached the bottom of the stairs, she saw a little girl with long brown hair, the same eye colouring as Hinata and wore a brown muscle shirt and the same colour of pants that reached her knees.

"Hanabi, what time is it?"

"It's four-thirty… You've been asleep for a while Hinata… Neji had to bring you home. Why did you faint in math class?"

Hinata couldn't answer… how could she answer her little sister something like that? Shaking her head, Hinata started to walk away, not wanting to deal with answering the question as to why she fainted… Dang… why did she faint? Even she didn't understand about the reason why, only that it had something to do with Naruto…

Did she like him?

Shaking her head, the blue haired woman knew that she can't keep thinking about that, knowing that if she did that it would drive her insane. Taking a deep breath, Hinata walked into the kitchen and grabbed her favourite apron. As she looked through the cupboards Hinata was thinking on how to get this into Naruto's locker… How was she supposed to get a small box of chocolate brownies into a locker?

Sighing softly, Hinata kept on looking, till she found a small card that had the instructions on how to make the brownies.

Milk powder - 1 cup
Cocoa powder - 3 tsp
Icing sugar - 1/2 cup
Condensed milk
- 2 tbsp
Butter - 1 -2 tsp
Cashew Almond powder - 1 tsp
Milk - 1/4 cup

This looks easy enough. Smiling brightly, Hinata giggled softly and started to get to work… After all, cooking was one of her many talents. Though, she still hoped that Naruto liked chocolate.


'Come on Hinata, you can do this… Naruto is just like any other guy… Sure, Valentines isn't till Friday but… I don't even think about who you're giving it too, but just… like giving it to a friend…'

Taking a deep breath, Hinata walked over to Naruto's locker, after sweet talking the office for it… Least they knew that Hinata was a good kid… Looking at his locker, the young woman listened carefully as she tried to crack the code… It didn't really take all that long, thanks to her enhanced hearing… Once the locker was open, Hinata slid the box of brownies on the top shelf in plain sight, along with a small note.

Smiling at her work, Hinata closed the locker and left after locking it back up so he won't get upset if someone tried to steal his jacket. As soon as Hinata turned the corner, she had heard footsteps, a sure sign that someone was coming near. Smiling, the young woman turned and saw Naruto opening his locker…

His eyes still looked at blank as usual, it was so sad to see his eyes like that… why did it make her heart ache?

Shaking her head, Hinata blinked when she saw Naruto gasp in shock. Tilting her head to the side, she looked over at Naruto and saw him reading the letter that she had left him. Though, there was something that she hadn't expected… for his face to turn into a light pink. He shook his head and started to open the box and took a bite of the brownies only to smile brightly.

Naruto closed his locker and started to walk away while munching on the brownies.

Hinata couldn't help but smile, least something good was happening sometime this week… Taking a deep breath, the young woman started to walk off to go to her art class. Now, she had to make sure that she kept this a secret to herself and not tell her friends for if she knew them as well as she does, than they would just panic and worry about her and try to tell her to stay away from him…

Sadly for her friends, that isn't going to happen at all, there was no way that she was going to let them find out and even if they did, well… there was no way that she was going to let them tell her what to do… it was her life, not theirs.

Once in art class, Hinata sat down and smiled as she started to get to work. Only for her to spray paints all over her canvas when Sakura and Ino grabbed her shoulders.

"What are you guys trying to do?"

"Hinata, we heard you left brownies in Naruto's locker! Just what are you thinking?" Angrily whispered Sakura to her blue haired best friend, Hinata could only sigh, this was something that she didn't need… she didn't want her friends to worry so much, it was just a gift, not like he was going to do anything harsh to her, sides, Naruto looked like he really enjoyed her gift.

"It was only brownies Sakura. Naruto looked like he liked them, sides it wasn't like I did any harm…" Hinata said with a frown, she only wanted Naruto to feel welcome, nothing more… though, she'll admit, it would have been nice if she could get a date for Valentine's Day, but had a feeling that it wouldn't happen no matter how hard she tried.

"He's no good Hinata. He'll only hurt you in the end." Calmly said Ino, though her voice was mostly filled with sadness and worry, rather than anger like Sakura it was something that she had gotten used to by now, but it would be nice if they didn't worry so much… there just wasn't a point too, Hinata knew how to defend herself.

"Just promise that you won't go overboard alright? We don't want to lose you, or let anything bad happen to you."

Nodding, Hinata knew that they only wanted what was best for her… but what if Naruto was what was best for her? That, was something she knew would be better for her was to give it a try… and the only way to find out, was to wait…


So far, nothing… Hinata thought that Naruto would ask her out yesterday to… well, repay her for the brownies… But maybe, he just didn't really care as much. Sighing softly, Hinata was at her locker getting her books for her next class trying to think of another way to help Naruto feel a little more at home.

Yet, nothing came to mind for her at the moment.

Sighing, the young woman closed her locker only to see Naruto standing by her. Blushing softly, she said "um… hi Naruto…" She hadn't expected to see Naruto here… the idea that he was near her made her heart flutter in her chest. Twirling a lock of her hair between her fingers, she asked "can I help you?"

Naruto just gave her his goofy smile as he said "I wanted to thank you for the brownies. You'd make one man a lucky wife someday." Hinata blushed at that… she'd make a good wife? Blushing all the more, Hinata looked up at Naruto through her lashes, wondering what he would want… there was no way that he was only coming here to compliment her cooking. Right?

"Is there… something you wanted?"

"Oh right, I wanted… well… see… I wanted to know if I could take you out somewhere tomorrow…? Like… well… a date." Naruto said as he scratched the back of his head in a nervous gesture…

He… he was asking her out on a date! For Valentine's Day! This was a dream come true for Hinata. It made her so happy that he wanted to ask her out on a date, and it gave her some time to find some nice clothes to wear tomorrow too instead of being told at the last possible minute. Least he had some manners.

"I'd love to Naruto."

Naruto smiled more and nodded as he said "great, I'll pick you up tomorrow around… three?"

Hinata nodded to that and grabbed a piece of paper and wrote down her address before handing it to Naruto. Her face was tinted a soft pink as she smiled up at him. Today couldn't have gotten better could it? Not only did she have a date for tomorrow but it was with the transfer student. Now, all she had to do was pick something nice to wear that would let her be warm, but not over dressed for the weather…


Minutes Before

Naruto was going to do it… he knew that Hinata was mostly being nice but… the brownies were wonderful. He just had to ask her out but, worried that she would say no. That she would think that he was only going to use her, just like what was in those stupid rumors that people spread about him.

Sighing, he looked at Hinata's locker, it was still empty, a sure sign that she hadn't arrived yet. Taking a deep breath, the young man knew that he could use this time to relax himself. Though, before he could even begin to calm himself, Naruto felt someone's hand on his shoulder. Narrowing his eyes, he turned around and came face to face with a pink haired girl…

'Isn't this one of Hinata's friends?' thought Naruto with a blink of his eyes. Tilting his head to the side, Naruto calmly asked "can I help you?" Sure, this girl was one of Hinata's friends but there was no way that he was going to let this girl ruin anything… he had to ask Hinata out…

"You're not good enough for Hinata Naruto. She is out of your league. Anyone could agree, who would want to be your girlfriend with your reputation?" said the pink haired girl, who had only made Naruto narrow his eyes into slits. There was no way that he was going to let her talk down to him like that. Sure, Hinata was beautiful… smart… kind… caring… but damn it he was caring too, he would do nothing to harm her no matter what.

Taking a deep breath, Naruto tried to keep himself calm… He had to speak to her calmly or risk people thinking he was going to hit a girl that really did deserve it. Staring at her with calm eyes, he said "why do you say that? Has it ever occurred to you that I want to get to know her more?"

"You only want to hurt her."

"I do not! I would never hurt people."

"Like how you shot someone?"

"That is a lie."

"Oh yeah, prove it. Oh wait you can't cause the guy is dead!"

"Shut up! You know nothing about me!"

"Stay away from Hinata. You'll hurt her, I know you will. And there is no way in hell would you be able to take her out on a good date."

"You know what? Just to prove you wrong I'll take Hinata out on the best date of her life! We'll do whatever she wants to do and you won't stop me." Naruto growled out before turning to see that Hinata was at her locker, now was as good as a time as any wasn't it? This was his last chance to ask her out…

And, to make sure that Hinata had the date of her life… nothing and he means nothing is going to stop him at all. Not now, not ever.


Today was the day, the day that she was going on a date with Naruto Uzumaki… but, Hinata was nervous as hell… She's never been on a date before, and she wanted to look her best when on her date with Naruto.

Taking a deep breath, Hinata looked through her closet in the hopes to find something that she could wear for her date. It had to be something warm, but also nice… and that was saying a lot… She didn't have a lot of clothes that had both… Grabbing a pair of black dress pants she tossed that onto her bed as she tried to find a nice shirt…

Something that would go well with the pants that she had chosen for tonight, though… the shirt she found looked perfect! It was a simple white shirt, the sleeves ending at her elbows. There were swirls of light pink and purple around the arms and the bottom near her waist, which the swirling colours also flow around her waist and goes upward on her back to her shoulders.

It wasn't perfect but it would have to do for today…

Once Hinata got herself dressed, she grabbed her purse and walked down the stairs as she grabbed her coat. Naruto should be here any time now… Though, she didn't tell her father that she had a date… Not like he would have listened to her anyway… he was so busy with work that he didn't have time to listen to her.

Ah well, least she left a note to tell her father where she had gone… sides, nothing bad could happen right?

With that, the doorbell rang and Hinata opened the door to see Naruto wearing an orange dress shirt and black slacks. He also still wore his headband and his black jacket. She couldn't help but blush at him… the headband and jacket fit him perfectly no matter what else he wore.

"Ready?" asked Naruto with a big grin on his face.

Hinata just nodded, walked out of the house and locked it up before leaving. Naruto offered Hinata his arm and she, of course accepted it as they started to walk down to wherever they were going. When Hinata looked up at him, she noticed that he looked… confused?

"Is something the matter Naruto?"

"Nah, well… I'm just confused about something. Why did… well… why did you make those brownies for me? Aren't you afraid of me? Cause of those rumors around school…?"

"That depends, are they true…?"

"Part of it true, but… well… they were just mistakes."

"Like the whole 'you being in a gang' thing?"


Hinata blinked, least she was getting some answers. It made her smile that he was trusting her enough with some of these… there were still other rumors that she had to know if they were true or not… "Did you really beat up a gang?"

"Yeah, but because they were trying to hurt some kids that were in the wrong place at the wrong time," Naruto ran a hand through his hair as he stared at her, giving her a small smile… Hinata could tell… just tell that he was starting to feel a little better about telling her what really happened, and how the rumors were really being spread…

Trying to remember what had been said was tough… Taking a deep breath, Hinata laid her head on his arm as she tried to think on what else had been said over the last few days. "Did you really kill someone?"

Naruto sighed softly and he looked like the memory itself pained him. "I was walking home from the store one day… There was some sort of gun fight going on and a guy walking out from his home and he got hit… I kicked the shooters ass and one of the guns happened to have slid toward the poor man and I knelt next to him wanting to make sure that he was okay. I even called for an ambulance… but… they thought I killed him. Even though my finger prints weren't on the gun, and my name was cleared at the police station, the rumor took place… No matter what I do, they just assume that I've done bad things in my past."

Hinata couldn't help but feel sorry for Naruto. It seemed that his whole life was filled with nothing but bad luck and nothing more… Frowning, Hinata hugged Naruto wanting to help comfort him. It had to be tough being accused of so many things in his life for something he didn't even do. Looking up at him, Naruto gave a small smile as he said "let's go get something to eat kay?"

Hinata couldn't help but smile as they walked toward a ramen restaurant. She didn't mind ramen, but it sure did seem to have made Naruto happy in the least. He deserved it after telling her the stories behind the rumors. When they had sat down, there was a large group sitting a few rows away from Naruto and Hinata… So, they would have to wait a while before their meal arrived.

"So, what would you like to do while we wait Hinata?" asked Naruto with a bright and cheerful smile on his face. It seemed like he had completely forgotten all about the rumors for now. That was good; Hinata wanted Naruto to have fun, maybe just as much as he wanted her to have fun.

"So, what's it like in art class?"


"I mean, what's it like at the school? No! I mean… uh…"

Hinata giggled, Naruto thought that talking about school was a good conversation. Reaching out, Hinata held Naruto's hand as she said sweetly "calm down Naruto. Relax okay? Just be yourself…"

Naruto just sighed softly, trying to help calm down his nerves. This was his first date, Hinata could tell… so the other rumor about those other girls was a lie as well. She knew it. Smiling, Hinata calmly asked "so, what do you like to do in your spare time?"

"Well, when I can I help my dad with the company."


"Yeah, my family own the Uzumaki Metal Company."

"You're rich?"

"Didn't you know that?"

"No, you don't act like those rich snobs that come to the school." Hinata said with a smile, giggling softly, she gave a cheerful smile as she said "I'm glad that you don't though. Or else I wouldn't have given you those brownies." She couldn't help but laugh at that. The idea of Naruto being a snob made her laugh; it was just so strange for him to be anything other than the person she knew. But, it was quite a surprise that he was rich.

Remember the feelings, remember the day,
My stone heart was breaking, my love ran away.
This moments I knew I would be someone else
My love turned around and I fell,

Hinata blushed when the song started to play. Sure, this was her favourite song but it was just so strange that this would be playing on their date. Sure, Naruto is in a way a bad boy, but from what she can tell so far, it's mostly just in his style… For, it seems that Naruto likes the 'bad boy' style rather than dress up like most guys his age.

Be my bad boy, be my man,
Be my weekend lover, but don't be my friend.
You can be my bad boy, but understand
That I don't need you in my life again.

"May I have this dance?" asked Naruto as he smiled at Hinata. She couldn't help but blush at him but nodded as both of them got up and started to go onto the dance floor. Since, it wasn't a slow song they couldn't dance like that but… least they could do something while waiting for their food to get here right?

Won't you be my bad boy, be my man,
Be my weekend lover, but don't be my friend.
You can be my bad boy, but understand
That I don't need you again.
No I don't need you again.

Naruto and Hinata stood next to each other; instead of just doing strange moves… they danced with what appeared to be… fighting styles? Everyone cheered them on as they danced. Naruto and Hinata were having the time of their lives at this moment. It was as if their own relationship was built on the ordinary… maybe that was what made it so interesting…

Bad boy!

They froze on the ground, as if trying to figure out their next move. As if they were really in a war rather than just dancing and having the time of their lives. But, it seemed that was what was really making their dance interesting… more fun… unique… just like them.

You once made this promise to stay by my side,
But after some time you just pushed me aside.
You never thought that a girl could be strong,
Now I'll show you how to go on.

Naruto and Hinata did back flips, side flips, you name it, and they did it. Both had smiles on their faces as they moved. Naruto grabbed Hinata by her hands and spun her around before having her land on her feet once more. Both teens smiled at each other with calm yet loving emotions written all over their faces. Taking a deep breath, Hinata slid on the floor, as did Naruto.

As if they were really flowing with the beat.

Be my bad boy, be my man,
Be my weekend lover, but don't be my friend.
You can be my bad boy, but understand
That I don't need you in my life again

Hinata and Naruto both did cart wheels on the dance floor; both had smiles on their faces. Hinata knew that the song was coming to an end, and it almost made her sad that it was. Though, least this was building up her appetite at the moment… Giggling to herself, Hinata failed to notice the wet spot on the floor, and slipped.

Won't you be my bad boy, be my man,
Be my weekend lover, but don't be my friend.
You can be my bad boy but understand
That I don't need you again.
No I don't need you again.

Naruto gasped softly, slid on the floor, landing on his knees as he grabbed Hinata's wrist holding it high up and her back landing on his legs. Both teens blushed as the position they were in… though, everyone thought that it was part of their routine and clapped and cheered them on.

Gulping, Naruto helped Hinata up and went back to their table to get something to eat.

Their ramen arrived, and Naruto and Hinata both ate in silence, neither of them knew what to say after the way their dance ended… Sure, Hinata had fun but she feared that Naruto thought that she was a klutz… That was the last thing that she wanted for Naruto to think… well, one of the many things that she didn't want him to think about her.

Once they finished their meal, Naruto and Hinata both walked out of the restaurant, (after Naruto paid of course) they both decide for a nice walk through the park to finish off their date. Hinata looked up at Naruto and saw that he looked a little upset about something… but what could it be? Why would he be upset? Did she do something wrong?

"You alright Naruto?"

"Yeah it's… it's just that I felt like the date was horrible for you…"

"What are you talking about? You've been a gentleman, and this was a perfect date for my first one." She said with a smile, and she only smiled more when the young woman saw the blonde's cheeks turn into a light pink. Which, to Hinata was really cute on him, giggling softly, she stood up on her toes and kissed his cheek as she asked "what about you, did you have fun Naruto?"

He could only nod, least it was an answer… just not a vocal answer. Taking a deep breath, Hinata laid her head on his arm as she smiled softly. Today was the best Valentine's Day of her life…

The only problem was when they heard a voice that she hadn't expected to see till Monday…

"Hinata? Why are you out with Naruto?" asked Sakura as she walked through the park with a small shitzu puppy.

"On a date." Calmly said Hinata as if it was an everyday sort of thing, though when she looked up at Naruto… Hinata couldn't help but wonder why he looked so angry.

"Hinata, Naruto isn't good enough for you! You should go out with Kiba, least he'd treat you right."

"But Naruto has treated me right! He's been a complete gentleman the entire night." Calmly said Hinata, thinking that Sakura is being just a little over protective, almost like an older sister. But it still didn't give her the right to tell Hinata who she could or couldn't date.

"Hinata is right, I've treated her properly, and you have listened too much on those damn rumors about me when they're not even true! Just leave us alone and let us enjoy the rest of our date. And stop treating Hinata like she's five already!" Shouted Naruto, anger was clear in his voice, it should have frightened Hinata… but, she knew that he had every right to be angry…

Hinata squeezed his hand for a moment, hoping to help calm him down. Naruto looked down and smiled softly at her before walking on ahead, leaving Sakura with her mouth wide open in shock at how she had just been treated… no one had ever yelled at her before, since everyone knew that she could easily kick their ass…

Naruto and Hinata walked through the park toward Hinata's home…

Though, Naruto didn't want this date to end… it was so nice… so perfect… but he knew that it would have had to end at some point. Sighing, Naruto walked over to Hinata's front door and looked over at her for a moment. Giving a small smile, he calmly said "guess… I'll see you Monday huh?"

"If you want too… you can see me again tomorrow?" Hinata said with a small blush on her face. A blush that made her so adorable that Naruto couldn't resist… Smiling, he nodded before wrapping his arms around her and kissed her softly.

Naruto blushed crimson as did Hinata… both hadn't expected the kiss till the second or third date but… to them; it was just the end of a perfect date, and the beginning of a beautiful relationship…

The End.
okay, first off, this idea was from :iconrosetiger: so thank her/him for giving me the idea, now, this story took me either almost 2 weeks or almost a week, I don't know XD. Now, the ending didnt go as planned but I just really wanted to end it already T-T well, I hope you enjoy this ^^
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Borelloman Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
really good.
daga000 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I might start a fanfiction
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I wish you luck ^-^
daga000 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Now I only need to think of a plot....
krazykay24 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
fey89k Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's so cute ^^
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I plan to turn this into a story at some point though nothing in the bad boy oneshots will be involved
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kurenda Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
aw that was so cute
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fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank ya
Dragon-hime Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
I love this story!
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it ^-^
Dragon-hime Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
Your storys are so good! Continue all the projects you have!^-^ :3
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
poker3 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
listening to a song read the end, base drops
Alexbloodyhell Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Awesome Story!!Love it.
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
glad you love it ^-^
Alexbloodyhell Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Yup! you're amazing..!!!!
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank ya, there are other bad boy stories that I made
Alexbloodyhell Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Glad to hear i'll try reading them next time!!!!Believe it!
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Artist
that was i nice story :)
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it ^-^
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Artist
its good :)
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Artist
LavenderHyuuga27 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I luv all ur stories!!!! :love:
bea121998 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
This fic is crazy awesome! :D
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you should see the sequel I made to this
bea121998 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
I actually read the sequel before the original one :D haha ^///^ that was so cool! I mean, I never thought that you could use fighting styles for dancing, but once you think about it, it's so awesome! :D awesome job! I really love the stories behind Naruto's real stories of his "bad" past. It's kind of like how the real villagers thought of Naruto at the real series.
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
Katangaroo Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student General Artist
:clap: Bravo! That was really GOOD! it was a cliche, yes, but it was well deserved. =)
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Katangaroo Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student General Artist
naruhina-4evaXD Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
cute! :D
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you liked it
This is awesome ! I love your wirting stlye
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you love it XD took me a long time to get to writing the way I do now XD
its a really good fic what I loved is that unlike in mine I always have Naruto hitting Sakura I would post thoes fics but I don't want to get flamed for it =[
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure if that counds as flamed, I think of it as 'ainti-Sakura'
yeah true I really hate Sakura
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
jadialuvsnaruhina Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
dxa18 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
OMGGGG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! *_____*
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you do ^_^
greaper3000 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
just amazing.

The song you picked was prefect i had to stop and find it on youtube and listen to it while reading
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ glad you loved it ^_^
utaokureru Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aw, its so adorable! i love it!
fire-inu-princess Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you loved it ^_^
ricebunnichan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Student Photographer
naww this is adorable i want part 2!! XD
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